My Writing competition writing

 Hello this is my writing i did for the eight fabo story competition. i was to late to put it in the competition cause i forgot. for the competition you must write 500 to 550 words if you went over 550 words you will be disqualified. You have a story starter that is above the now you finish the story that is not added to the 550 words you continue the story under the now you continues the story the writing you write under the now you continue the story counts to the 550 words.  here's my writing hope you like it.

Story starter

Mark and Maeve skipped along the dark corridors of McMinty Towers, and into the dining hall. They expected to see their mother sitting at the head of the table. Instead, they found a letter pinned to the top of a large, black chest.

My Dear Twins,

First of all, Happy Birthday!

This chest contains two magical things:

1 x Witch-Starter-Kit   &

1 x Wizard- Starter-Kit

Please choose one kit. Choose carefully as you cannot swap your kit once you have chosen. However, Mark may choose the Witch-Starter-Kit, while Maeve might choose the Wizard-Starter-Kit. It doesn’t matter.

Please write down each spell you test, and the results. A few words of warning. When starting out, I advise all young witches and wizards to use their new powers wisely. Because spells, when not followed correctly can go terribly wrong. Terribly wrong!

Good luck. Good luck, I repeat. You will need it.

Yours in witchcraft

Mother Witch McMinty

Mark shrugged his shoulders. Maeve opened the chest …

Now you finish the story...

She thought hard about what to choose, she thought and chose the witch starter kit. She opened it and there was an explosion of magic. witches robes went flying in a blink of an eye the robe came on she gasped in wonder then the broom went flying It pointed at a mysterious mystery map? Mark quickly grabbed the wizard starter kit. Suddenly a luminous light appeared when he opened it... thwack the wizard robe slapped on out of nowhere. A magical staff pointed at a mystery map like Maeve’s one but it went somewhere else. They saw a mini potion glass that said Teleport to place on map by smashing potion under you. They brought the starter kit and they Teleported to that place. Mark's place is a wizard cave with potions with magic already. Maeve’s place was a witch's hut with ready potions like marks. Their caves and huts were close to each other. 

There was another entity in the kit that wasn't there before it was a book of potions and spells. Mark and Maeve were curious about what was in the book they opened; there were hundreds of spells and how to make them and where to find the ingredients. But then there was a loud tweet, Maeve and Mark looked for some good potions to bring in the hut and cave to see what was happening. Maeve found a sleepy and healing potion so she brought that. Mark brought a flame potion and a tp potion so he brought those. They saw a bird under attack by a grey wolf! The wolf growled and snarled at the bird. Rapidly Maeve threw the sleepy potion at the wolf the wolf went asleep and Mark let the bird drink some of the healing potion then the 

bird said “thanks” in human language Mark and Maeve gasped

 “a talking bird!?” Mark and Maeve Shouted the bird replied “all animals in the magic forest can talk” 

“ok” Responded Mark and Maeve. 

“My name’s tweety” responded the bird “im Maeve im 12 and he’s Mark and he’s 10”said Maeve “ok” said tweety. “ There is a magical portal to get to the witch and wizard realm to get there you must find the portal '' said tweety “ok” responded Mark. So they got ready to travel in the deep dark forests. They had healing potions.Sleepy potions, bird seeds, food,water,shovel and brought a weird potion that said Aroma  loaihi kapo that went in Mark's bag. They started traveling and they ate, drank, gave tweety bird seeds and water and set came. They have traveled for days setting up camp many times then they set it up one more time and in the morning there was an enchanted looking rock in the ground they dug it up and… they found it and saw writing that said splash Aroma loaihi kapo potion. They threw that on the floor and the portal was ignited they went through and it looked like an enchanted city. Every witch and wizard were happy to see them and Mark and Maeve saw their mum. Their mum gave Mark and Maeve a New Witch hut and Wizard cave, the bird their mothers pet and they lived the rest of their life there. the end.